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Subject: ~*~*~BAZM E ADHAB~*~*~
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umeedpak 8.05.10 - 06:58pm
Bohat Malomati tehreer paish kerne ka shukria
Kamix.
iss kism k moozo'aat pr Aik alahida
thread start hoota tu ziyada moozoo thaa.......
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umeedpak 8.05.10 - 06:58pm
Job Less!!! *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 06:59pm
Ali nay jab aankh kholi too ussay apnay ird gird laug
chaltay phirtay khadonay mehsoos kiay uss kay nazdeek
wo pata nahi kis jagah aa chuka tha lekin waqt guzarnay
kay sath sath ussay ehsas hoa kay wo bhi issi kee tarah
kay hain orr bara ho ker wo bhi inhi jaisa ho jaye ga.
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umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:00pm
Waqt apni parwaz urta raha orr
ye tamam baten qissae pareena
ban gayen ussay yad bhi na raha
kay kabhi wo din bhi tha. *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:02pm
Iss kee zindagi nay aik aham morr tab kaata
jab uss ka takra parhai kay baad asal kaam
yani kamai kerna tha, *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:02pm
ussay ehsas hoa ka
mayari zindagi basar
kernay kay liye aik
aham shay zarorri hoti
hai jis chirya ka naamkamayi hai. *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:04pm
uss nay darbadar kee thokren
khayeen lekin nokri nadarad. *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:05pm
Ab too ghar walay bhi uss say tang aa gye thay orr
ussay har waqt ajeeb nazron say ghortay rehtay thay
kabhi kisi baat men wo ikhtalaf raaye say kam laita too
uss kee taraf qehar aalod nazron khari muskura raheen hoti. *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:06pm
Ali kee kafiat majnon jaisi ho chali thi aik din
jab woo issi tarah job kee talash men darbadar
thokren kha raha tha too uss kay mann men janay
kya aayi kay uss kay qadam bus stop kee janib ho
niklay, uss ka too ab qadmon per bhi bass na raha tha... *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:07pm
wo apni hee sochon men gumm challa ja raha tha jab uss
nay aik admi ko bomb rakhtay hoay dhekha wo admi chand
lamhon men hee nigahon say ojhal ho gya *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:10pm
Ali kay
pass waqt bohat kam tha ya too woo apni jan bacha ker
bhag sakta tha ya phir....
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umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:13pm
Ali nay kuch socha orr phir konwen men cycle chalany
walay madari kee tarah konwen men chalang laganay ka
faisla ker lya. Woo taizi say dorta hoa gya orr bomb
walay thelay ko utha ker wairanay kee taraf bhagnay *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:14pm
laga laug ussay ajeeb o ghareeb nigahon say ghor rahay
thay orr ussay ajj phir wo laug khidonon kee tarah
mehsoos ho rahay thay per ab iss kay dil men aik ajeeb
sa itmenan tha woo dorta chala gya. *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:15pm
Achanak aik jagah
jahan koi banda nahi tha woo bomb aik kanon ko phar
dainay walay shor say phat para har taraf shoro ghoogha hogya... *
umeedpak 8.05.10 - 07:15pm
police aayi orr karwai hoyee investigation hoyee orr aglay din kee headline thi
Maa'shray ko tabah kernay wala Job Less!! *
rahiba 8.05.10 - 09:27pm
ZABARDAST UMEED SISTER INTERESTING. *
umeedpak 26.05.10 - 02:24pm
Thanks rahiba ji. *
umeedpak 26.05.10 - 02:25pm
Itna pyaara topic qiyun ojad pada hai
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umeedpak 26.05.10 - 02:25pm
ek larki andhi hoti hai jise sub se nafrat hoti hai sivay ek larke ke jo us se bohat pyar karta ta aur kehta ta ke main tum se shadi karna chahta hoon laikin larki kehti ti jab meri ankhain theak ho jay gi tab main tum se shadi karon gi.
kuch mahino baad us ki ankain theak ho jati hai laikin woh aek chiz dekh kar bohat hairan hojati hai ke jo larka mujh se pyar karta ta woh khud aek andha hai larka jab larki se boltha hai
ke kiya tum mujhe se ab shadi karo gi ?
tu woh larki bolti hai ke nahi tum to andhain ho main tum se shadi nahi karon gi
us ke baad larka sirf yeh keh kar waha se chala jata hai ke
mere ankhon ka khiyal rakna........ *
z_haidar 26.05.10 - 02:32pm
v nice Umeed pak 
.ye msg mujhe bhi kisi ne send kya tha, mujhe bohot pasand aaya..tum ne phir se yaad taza kar di...thanks 4 shairing..
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qayinat 26.05.10 - 06:34pm
Nice but sad story umeedpak thanks. *
rabianaz 26.05.10 - 11:33pm
hmmmm!!Nice l0ve st0ry'gudluck *
ajnabii 4.07.10 - 09:20am
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a.misra 4.07.10 - 12:52pm
faiz saheb ki shairy deewana bana deti hai.lafzon ke jadu main har koi kho jata hai. *
xxkamixx 11.07.10 - 07:08am
saleem!
aik sahib e ikhtyaar ke liay wo muqam bada nazuk hota hay jahan uski zaati jazbaat o mufadaat (intrests) darmiyaan mein aa jaaein.
wo dekho saleem!!!
manzer ke zara uss paar .
jang e bader ke qaidi rassi-on (rops) mein bandhe huay hein. in mein hazoor(saw) ke chacha (uncle)Abas bhi hein . wo san e raseed hein iss liay karaH rahe hein .unke kerahne ki awaaz se aap(saw) ki dil per aser hota hay . chehre ki afsurdagi , dill ki kaifiyat ke ghumaaaz ho jati hay. rufqaa ki diqat e nazer iss androoni kashmakash ko bhaamp leti hay . thodi dair badh chacha ke kerahne ki awaaz bandh ho jati hay . aap (saw) poochte hein ke ye kaise hua ?
jawaab milta hay ke hazrat e abas ki rassiyaN dheeli ker di gai hein !
ye sun ker chehra ghusay se tamtamaa uthta hay or farmaya : tum ne unn ki rassiyaaN iss liay deeli ker dein ke wo mere chacha hein?
tum ne qanoon ki bajaaye rishta daari ko ehmiyat di ? tum ne bohat bura kia !!!
ya to tum tamam qaid_ion ki rassiyaaN deeli kero or ya phir abas ki rassiyaN bhi issi tarah kass ker bandho . *
xxkamixx 11.07.10 - 08:10am
or abh zara aage badho saleem !!!
inn hi qaidi_on mein aap (saw) ki damaad ( ABU UL AASS ) bhi hein!
mashwara hota hay saath kia kiia jaay?.
( abhi tak jangi qaidiyon ke mutalaq Quran ka hukam nazal nhi hua tha jis mein kaha gaya hay ke , jaugi qaidiyon ko ya to zer e fidiya le ker ya tabadla mein rehaa ker do , ya ehsaan rakh ker chhod do )
faisla hua ke inn-ein qatal ker dia jaye!
or her qaidi ka rishta daar usse khudh qatal kere.
dekho saleem !!!
ye gadhi kis qader nazak hay . beti ka suhaag lut raha hay or usse khud apne hatho,n se beva banaya ja raha hay .lekin faisla jub qanoon ka ho to phir uss mein koi taaml hota hay na takheer , na taradad na baiti ki mohabat anaa geer hoti hay na uss ke mustaqbil ke musaaib daman kash !
( majlas nazool e Quran ki ayaat pe mushwrat kerti hay or apne sabqa faisla per nazer e saani ker ke inn qaidiyon ko zer e fidiya le ker reha kerne ka faisla kerti hay)
yahaan saleem ! aik or waqia saamne ata hay jise likhte huay dill laraz jata hay or hath kaanp uthte hein.
inn qaidiyon ka zar e fidiya managa gaya .
Mohamad (saw) ki baiti ( Hazrat e Zianab ) ne apne khawandh ka zar e fidiya bheja. wo zar e fidiya kia hay?
kaanch ka aik purana haar !
tume maloom hay saleem !!! ke ye haar kon sa hay ?
berso,n pehle jab Rasool Allah (saw) ki shadi Hazrat e Khudija (ra) se hui to aap(saw) ne wo sada se haar beevi ko shadi ke tohfay mein dia tha . iss ke badh jab Zainab (ra) ki shadi hui to maa ne baiti ko alvida kerte waqat wohi haar baiti ke ke galay mein daal dia.
Or aaj
wohi haar baiti ne apne khawandh ki rehaai ke liay bator e fidiya bejh dia hay.
iss tarah tamaam guzashta waqiyaat ki yaad meh baap ke dil mein taza hay.
haar saamne mataa e fidiya ke dhair mein pada hay. or aap (saw) uss ki taraf tik tiki bandhe dekh rahe hein or guzri hui dastaan-ein aik aik ker ke cinma ki film ki terah nigah-on ke samne se guzerti jati hein.
Hazrat e khudija (ra) jesi bivi jis ne islam ki khatir apna sub kuch qurban ker dia.
aisi paiker e muhabat o khuloos rafeeqa e hayaat !
dill mein jazbaat ka aik tofan ummda, uss ka aik qatra sitara e sub-gaahi ki tarah sar misgaan chamka or muqadas rukhsaaro per zam zam bar or koser farosh ho gaya.
iss kanch ke haar ki qeemat hi kia hay ? saleem!!!
lekin iss mein guzri hui zindagi ke haseen o taab-naak yaadon ki aik qaynat simti hui hay.
WO CHAR SOOKHE HUAY TINNKE YOU,N TO KIA THAY , MAGER
QAFAS MEIN AA HI GAI YAAD AASHYAANE KI!
dill mein jazbaat ka aik mehsher bapa tha lekin lab bandh thay.
ba hasiyat e maar ul momimeen (commandor in charge ) aap (saw) ko ye haq hasal hay ke zatr e fidiya ki taqseem jis tarah chahein ker dein lekin iss haar ke sath aapke(saw) zaati jazbaat wa basta hein iss liay aap nahi chahte ke apni marzi se isse khudh lay leinya baiti ko wapas ker dein.
haar abh millat ki mataa hay or aap(saw)uss ke ameen.
ya kia muqamaat hein saleem??
kuch samjhe? *
ajnabii 22.07.10 - 07:51pm
Bohat umdah tehreer hai kamran bhai shukria janab...
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ajnabii 22.07.10 - 07:51pm
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ajnabii 23.07.10 - 10:08pm
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xxkamixx 1.10.10 - 05:23pm
boht ache . Ajnabi bhai . Aap kidhar ho yar ? *
i_am_ur 1.10.10 - 08:55pm
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Bh00l gahy hain @ajnabii bhaiya Hum k0 shayad .. 
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sumbul 2.10.10 - 06:53am
very nice n gd topic. Mujhe itni jankari to nahi hai urdu adab ki phr b koshish krti hun.........khareed leta unhe apni zindgi bhi dekar, mgr kuch log qeemat se ni qismat se mila karte hain *
xxkamixx 2.10.10 - 04:21pm
namashkar . Sumbal . is etehasak sandhya (bazm e adhab) mein apka swagat hay .
Ye humare liay bade so bhaag ki bat hay ke yahaa,n urdu likhario,n ke sath sath ap jese hidi likhari bhi awantrit hein .
Mein kese parche doon apka ka mein is shardhaan ke liay apne ap ke bohat samrath samajhta hoon .
Keval itna hi kahun ga ke , adha,dniaye . Sumbul ji .
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sumbul 2.10.10 - 05:22pm
bht bht shukriya kami! Waise mai bhi urdu me hi intrst rakhti hun wo alg bat h k aaplogo jitni knwlg ni h phr b sikhna chahungi! Or pro k baqi members spcly is grp walo ko mera salam arz! *
sumbul 3.10.10 - 02:59am
hanlaki kami sahab ne mera taaruf bataur hindi writer krwaya h phr bhi maine urdu me hi kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....... Wo meri zaat k har pehlu me samaya hota hai, wo alag bat hai bs aankho se numaya hota hai, juda hota hi nahi uska khayal ek pal mujhse, uska sehar din rat kuch aise chaya rahta hai....... *
i_am_ur 3.10.10 - 03:14am
Emmm! wl c*m 2 @UM @sumbul ..
'bah0t c shubkaamnaen Ap k naam n Namashkar' *
sumbul 3.10.10 - 04:24am
shukriya n shubhkamnao k lie dhanyawad! *
xxkamixx 6.11.10 - 02:50pm
na jane wo mere humsafar kahaa,n pohnche ?
Ke rah guzar to mere sath hi palat aai !
Boht dino bad yad aya ke buzm e adhab nam ka aik topic bhi hua kerta tha !
Kuch k*m go hazraat ke kehna hay ke ye topic boht wazni hay or likhne ka wakt kise hay ?
Bat to darust hay ! . Lekin maqsad insaan se sub kuch kerwa leta hay .
Jub maqsad samne ho to mushkil se mushkil kam bhi ba asaani kia ja sakta hay .
Or ye baat bhi darust hay ke buzm e adhab me aaj tak tamam tehreerein mehz apne apne zaati mutaala or usko shair kerne ki khatir hi likhi gai hein or maqsad se khaali hein !
Ya ye kehna munsib ho ga ke kis khaas maqasad ke baghair likhi gai hein .
Is bat ko paish e nazer rakhte huay mein purane or naye UMAG memberz ko aik bar phir dawat dena chahoo,n ga ke wo bazm e adhab mein , aaindha se kis khas muzu pe likha kereingaye . Jis mein unke apne zaati khayalaat ke izhaar ko jaga mil sake gi .
Aise keh leejay ke DEBATE ya muqabla hua kere ga kis subject ke pe . Aap uske haq mein ya uske khilaaf apne khayalaat ka izhaar kia kerein gaye ! . Kia khayal hay apka ? *
swtzainb 6.11.10 - 02:56pm
Ummmmmm.. *
z_haidar 6.11.10 - 04:13pm
G bhaiya.. Hum aap k sath hain. 
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i_am_ur 6.11.10 - 05:09pm
Emmmm! bah0t dard chupa hai ap ki bat0n me bhaiya .. ye sach k Hum bh00l baithay ic g0hr-e-nayab k0 lekan ye b sach k waqt nahi mil pata .. 
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lekan baat ap hi ki duhra00nga k Maqsad k bina sab kuch by-faida hai .. aur ye kehtay huvy bilkul a6a nahi lag raha k sabhi meri tareh jz c0py paste ka sahara laitay hain .. aur w0 Maqsad tau kahin Rastay mein hi faut h0 jata hai
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lekan Dair aayad Durust aayad k ap ne bilkul sahih Intikhab kiya ab ki baar .. kuch Manzil ka pata ap btaiye, kuch raah ka chuna0 Hum krtay hain ..
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k0i b m0z00n dijiye baat krnay k0, Hum kam-fehem k0shish karain gay ap ka 7h dainay ki 
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xxkamixx 8.11.10 - 01:05pm
zainb , ali ,or haidar .
Apka be had shukria !
Apne itni acha responz dia.
Meine maqsad ki baat bohat soch ker ki thi . Maqsad se muraad aik to matlub hota hay ! Doosray nateejataan kisi cheez ka batoor inaam hasil kerna bhi ho sakta hay !
Ali ! Bhai kiun na hum aisa kerein ke sub se khubsurat dalaayl dene wale/ wali ko koi inaam bhi dein ?
Maslunn aik tajweez jo meine sochi hay wo ye ho sakti hay ke kisi subject pe sub se ache dalaayl dene wale ya waali ko kuch arsa ke liaye ADMIN bunaya jaay ? . Aik hafta ya das din ? .
Is se mumkin hay likhne wale ka intrest badhe ? . Mager iske ilawaa bhi koi tajweez saame aaye to usko bhi dekh lena chahiay ? .
Ali ap kia kaho gaye bhai ? *
xxkamixx 8.11.10 - 01:21pm
muje nahi maloom ke group ki rating kis tarah hoti hay . Mere khayal mein ye dekha jata ho ga ke sub se ziada post kis group me hoti hay . UrduMAG mein posting mein sirf aik waja se kerta hoon . Shaaz hi aisa hua ho ga ke kis or group me mein ne kuch post kia ho . Subsantance ke sath sath urdumag mein ache likhne waale hamaish mojood rahe hein . Mehz cut an paste ka sahara le ker posting bohat k*m hua kerti thi urdumag mein . Mere khaya mein yahi urdu mag ki pehchaan rahi hay or isse kayaam rehna chahiay !
Buzm e adhab ko aik naya mod dene se mera zaati maqsad bhi yahi hay .
Mein humaisha chaha hay ke likhne wala apni soch ( chahe uska mayaar kuch bhi ho) ke mutabik likhe .
Budh qismati se guzashta kuch arsa se ye silsila kamzo padta dikhaai de raha hay . Umeed hay ke hum thodi ci tawajo se isse bahaal rakhne mein kamyaab ho sakein gaye . *
xxkamixx 16.11.10 - 04:03am
kisi ke door hone se mohabat k*m nahi hoti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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xxkamixx 16.11.10 - 04:08am
aik soch ye hay ke qurbat hi mohabat ki moojad hoti hay . or doosra nukta e nazer is se juda hay . jo ye samjhte hein ke mohabat aik juzbe ka naam hay us ke liaye kisi ka qareeb hona ya door , koi maane nahi rakhta!
ye aik aisa mozu hay jis ko quraida ja sakta hay . apna apna nukta e nazer hay . mushkil sahi mager hay dilchusp . aap kia kehte hain?
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xxkamixx 16.12.10 - 04:27pm
log jis bazm mein aate thay sitaray laye ker
hum uss bazm mein ba deeda e num aate hein *
xxkamixx 16.12.10 - 04:29pm
or kuch dair na guzray shab e hijraa,n se kaho
dil bhi kam dukhta hay wo yad bhi kam aate hein *
i_am_ur 18.12.10 - 07:01am
0 bhaiya dn b shad yar! ... Bazm-E-Adab kabhi Mand nahi honay daingay Hum but sabhi Gum Gummmmm!! *
saira33 22.12.10 - 08:07am
2 Titliyan ek dosry sy bht piyar krti thi
1din 2no ny Game khelny ka fesla kia
Or 1 phool fix kia k jo kal subah pehly Aa kr is phool pe bethy ga wo ziada piyar krta hai
Agly din un mai sy 1 Titli subah sb sy pehly pohanch gai
Or phool k khulny ka wait krny lagi
Jb phool khula to wo heraan reh gai ye dekh kr k dosri Titli phool k andar mari hoi pari hy
Q.
k.
wo kal rat sy hi phol k andr beth gai thi
Ye batany k liy k wo
Us sy bohat pyar krti hai. *
i_am_ur 23.12.10 - 04:17am
w0w! piyar h0 tau aisa *
